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Wednesday, 19 September 2018

The Wonderfully Worst Woodmen of the World

The wonderfully worst woodmen of the world “I saw them first. As soon as I did I let out a terrible Neigh! my night came running and jumped on to me,and we galloped off the cliff. I noticed that everything was turning grey when We got there I heard him say “ Groots family” I tried to get him of me, he was being a idiot now.Then the ground started to shake as the grand woodman (that is what were calling them) came out for a talk. He told us about the 3 deadly stages. After I made my night go in….. Into the Valley………. I bucked my night of and ran to a cave. I bent down to munch on some grass it tastes different. Soon after a ghost came from the ground and told me how the wood men got here. (in short words this is what he said:they swallowed demons and monsters in disguise and became evil. It happened last year in 1952 on a Wednesday. I ran back outside and the second deadly stage was here it smelt smokey. Next I saw it the off button in it’s mouth, I ran on to it’s foot and it kicked me into its mouth. After I asked Why did you come here and turned them off.There was a loud rumble and they crashed to the ground. Soon after it was over. Then Grandma horse finished her story. THE END.
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  1. Anonymous19 September 2018 at 09:45

    Hi Grace, I really like your story about 'The Wonderfully Worst Woodmen Of The World.' It was a cool short story. While I was reading it I realised that you were the horse. Maybe next time you could check your spelling (Knight), so that others that read your blog post would understand.

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    1. Anonymous25 September 2018 at 09:18

      Hi Talia I fixed the knight spelling go though again maybe it will sound a bit better. leave a comment. By the way thanks for the comment. what kind of books do you like?

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  2. Anonymous19 September 2018 at 09:52

    Hi Grace that was an awesome story I really loved how you put so much describing words it was also cool that you made it sound like I was in the story, I saw that you siad (that's what we called then) were you actaully going to say them? but that was still a very good story
    Bye

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    1. Anonymous19 September 2018 at 12:57

      Hi Thanks for the comment I was going to say then I don't know what happened. Anyway I fixed it up Why don't you come back and have another read? Leave another comment:).

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