New Church 17/10/18
My school had workers build a new church because our old church was crumbly.
There were cracks in the walls and everything so my class had to write about the first time we went into
the new church.
There were cracks in the walls and everything so my class had to write about the first time we went into
the new church.
The first time I went to the new church I was in the choir when I walked in I noticed the big light above
the baptismal font / holy water I blessed myself and followed miss lee to our seats. My oldest brother
and sister were behind me. I saw the lovely stained glass window by the beautiful picture of a church.
I saw the two statues of Mary and st Bernadette. St Bernadette had a rosary in her closed hands and
Mary had a row of stars around her. Then there was the spectacular tabernacle a load of different colors
mix to make one master peace. On top of the statues there were bid grey boxes with red crosses on
them, above that was were the projections go. (there were two one for each side.) I liked the old carpet
better but this one was nice to. It was a striped black grey whitish color. The seat the priest sat on was
more like a throne, it had a bottom with the old carpet and a wooden structure. The seat part had a
cousin and beside it there was a smaller seat for guests. The stations of the cross were the same
painted gold with red crosses on the back and lastly the wallpaper was a nice tree design that turned out
to mean Jesus was the vine and we were the branches. That was how the church looked to me.
Throughout the church time a haka guy or something went down the side of the church doing some dance.
that was probably the most exciting part the rest Is pretty boring so yeah thats my first time in the new
church.
the baptismal font / holy water I blessed myself and followed miss lee to our seats. My oldest brother
and sister were behind me. I saw the lovely stained glass window by the beautiful picture of a church.
I saw the two statues of Mary and st Bernadette. St Bernadette had a rosary in her closed hands and
Mary had a row of stars around her. Then there was the spectacular tabernacle a load of different colors
mix to make one master peace. On top of the statues there were bid grey boxes with red crosses on
them, above that was were the projections go. (there were two one for each side.) I liked the old carpet
better but this one was nice to. It was a striped black grey whitish color. The seat the priest sat on was
more like a throne, it had a bottom with the old carpet and a wooden structure. The seat part had a
cousin and beside it there was a smaller seat for guests. The stations of the cross were the same
painted gold with red crosses on the back and lastly the wallpaper was a nice tree design that turned out
to mean Jesus was the vine and we were the branches. That was how the church looked to me.
Throughout the church time a haka guy or something went down the side of the church doing some dance.
that was probably the most exciting part the rest Is pretty boring so yeah thats my first time in the new
church.
( I was sad that I couldn’t have my holy communion in there though. )
The End
Hi Grace, Good writing. I like the way you put in why was the church getting re-built and also I liked the way you put'd more information about what was happening through the year. Maybe check if put more capital letters at the start of the sentence.
ReplyDeleteHi Denise I fixed the capital letters thanks for the comment.go through again it might look a bit better.
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Hey Grace, I really liked your New Church writing!, It reminded me of my writing!. Oh and did you write "baptismal font" on purpose? or is "font" suppose to be something else?? if so maybe you could fix that. And maybe you could work on capital letters. And I have a question what do you like about the new church?
ReplyDeleteHi Fria I already fixed the capital letters because of Denise's comment. Yes I did write font on purpose I thought thats how you write it. I like the stain glass windows too.
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