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Wednesday, 24 October 2018

The voices in my head

In class we where learning about writing narratives we had to do a sheet write a draft and then write it on our devices and post it on our blogs. we had seven different plots man vs nature man vs man man vs seniority man vs self man vs technology man vs super natural and man vs god. I chose man vs god here is my  story:
Voices In My Head
It was happening again. The voices were echoing in his head. He tried to sleep but it was no use, he rolled over for the fifteenth time. Dad had had these voices for as long as he could remember, and they gave him troubles for instance it took him three years to get a job, he worked in a hotel. Even so he still had his voices still echoing. Suddenly he yawned and drifted off to sleep.
Dad woke up and got dressed for work. He wore a licorice black tuxedo and a snowy white shirt underneath. On top of that he wore a ocean blue tie and ock brown shoes. Dad Jumped into his bright yellow car and drove to his hotel: hotel homes. He got out of his car and walked over to the hotel. He went in through the door and up to the check in desk waiting for someone to come. Suddenly the door slid open and a lady and six kids and a Dad came up to the desk. Name Dad said, Joe, John, James, Jesse, Jasmine, July, My husband is Joseph and I am Jessica.  Dad lasted a while while he typed the names down. Done. Said Dad . you are in room five . And the family walked off. Then his pregnant wife came in. Dad decided to tell Mum about the voices but when he did she said Ok this is to much I am dumping you. As soon as she left he decided to make the ark god wanted him to build.So he built it and just in time. A giant wave came and everyone rushed onto the boat. Mum was so scared she married Dad again and every lived happily ever after.( like the J family there kids were Harold Heather and Hamish )

THE END.

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