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Thursday, 15 November 2018

The party

I ran as fast as I could I didn't want them to get me. I jumped over root after root there was no way I was going to trip. I stopped a great river was in front of me I jumped. closing my eyes the wind whistled in my ears. Thud i had made it bu great pain came over me I twisted my ankle with the landing. They were gaining I ran of no ankle was going to stop me. suddenly two arms came down and I was lifted into the ear. It was a boggle-swatch I saw its jaws as it flashed a smile. Chop down the throat went I reached into my pocket and grabbed a knife digging it into the boggle-swatch's flesh. I hung on tight. there was a roar from above as it clawed at the knife with is paws. It turned upside down I let go and fell out of it mouth I ran among the branches hoping from one branch to the other I jumped and swag on a vine. Then I saw it a great light as if a party was going on in the distance. I found a switch-slog grazing on some grass I leaped upon it and galloped to the light. As I got there I saw Bungle-blogs partying I slowly trotted into the town, the music stopped everyone was staring at me suddenly a old Bungle-blog came and pulled my into the party. I saw them take my switch-slog to a barn as they to me to the middle of town me partied into the middle of of the night. When they finished they took me to the  bed room and tucked me up. In the morning the gave me a invitation it said: You are invited to are next party tomorrow. In the middle of town bring colorful clothes and matches. Be there! The next day I arrived at the middle of town with my clothes and my matches. I found everyone around a fire pit waiting for me. I found a spot next to a little girl and a small boy. Then the old guy said light your match. there was a glow  around the fire.

P.S this story is not finished. 

1 comment:

  1. Hi Grace, I like how you added lots of detail, I also like how you added punctuation in your story. Maybe you could check over your story and in your spare time please finish it I want to hear more!

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