Floating

  imagine this, your on a boat sailing eating dinner when bang suddenly your in the middle of a storm. lightning hits the ship and it starts to sink...

This has been our story starter for a few days along with the soundtrack of a storm to help. (click here to hear the soundtrack). This is my story I hope you enjoy it. Please leave a comment.

Lights camera action!

Dear Diary

I’m DOOMED

It all started a few minutes ago

We were having mush When we heard Billy shout 

Batten down the hatches. Which of course means a storm is coming. We leaped of our 

chairs like there was a barnacle under our behinds. The captain started to scream out orders

And then the panic began.

After a few minutes the storm reached us. BOOM lightning hit the mast burstin it ta a 

thousand flamin pisces. Sorry for the bad spellin i’m in a  rush. Now you should know that  

a pirates first fear is fire so now every one was screamin and running all over the place . 

balles o rum were smashing and people were running over licking the ground trying to make

 there last seconds last. The sound of water spashin and trying to put out the

 flames echoed in my ear and I heard the screams of our prisoners as

 the water started to flood into there cell. The cannons had some how gotten lose

 and were rolling around every were. The smoke of fire mixed with the salt

 of the sea as giant waves crash onto me. Oh diary tell me wife I love her. 

Bang lightning hit the ship again and the ship started to sink. People were trying to get the water

 out of the ship by throwing it overboard Im terrified diary Im cold and wet one second and then 

suddenly I sweating from the bonfire The ship was rocking like crazy I heard a scream as billy

 fell from the mast smashing onto the ground. I'm surprised he lasted that long 

on our mast. Suddenly I slip and fall into the giant waves. Goodbye cruel world. Wait no, I'm alive,

 diary i'm alive. I grabbed a barrel just in time as the ship sank behind me. I’m clinging on 

for me life and trying to climb on. Now i'm just 

floating…….floating…….floating….

I hoped you enjoyed my post click on the link above to hear the soundtrack I used. I learnt how to write in a way that hooks people in.

I hoped you enjoyed it. did you have a favorite part?

lesson Toru How to recognize a spam.

 What I know about spamming. They will not have a blog. They will send repetitive comments.They will not know much about a blog. You will have to tell a teacher or parent so they can sort it out.

Here is a link to a video about how to spot a spam Page three of slide deck on the first link..

I have made a book About how to spot a spam and how to start an online conversation on book creator.We did this for cybersmart and you can find a link to the lesson here.

And an easy way to start a conversation is to ask and answer questions.

Click here to view my book.

Here is what the cover looks like.

I have learned more about spamming then I knew before I learned how to spot a spam.

 I really liked using book creator but the pictures on the last page have gone which was frustrating. This is my first book and I hope to make more.

Have you ever used book creator before and if so What did you make the book about?

Floating

 imagine this, your on a boat sailing eating dinner when bang suddenly your in the middle of a storm. lightning hits the ship and it starts to sink...

This has been our story starter for a few days along with the soundtrack of a storm to help. (click here to hear the soundtrack). This is my story I hope you enjoy it. Please leave a comment.

Lights camera action!

Dear Diary

I’m DOOMED

It all started a few minutes ago

We were having mush When we heard Billy shout

Batten down the hatches. Which of course means a storm is coming. We leaped of our

chairs like there was a barnacle under our behinds. The captain started to scream out orders

And then the panic began.

After a few minutes the storm reached us. BOOM lightning hit the mast burstin it ta a

thousand flamin pisces. Sorry for the bad spellin i’m in a  rush. Now you should know that 

a pirates first fear is fire so now every one was screamin and running all over the place .

balles o rum were smashing and people were running over licking the ground trying to make

there last seconds last. The sound of water spashin and trying to put out the

flames echoed in my ear and I heard the screams of our prisoners as

the water started to flood into there cell. The cannons had some how gotten lose

and were rolling around every were. The smoke of fire mixed with the salt

of the sea as giant waves crash onto me. Oh diary tell me wife I love her.

Bang lightning hit the ship again and the ship started to sink. People were trying to get the water

out of the ship by throwing it overboard Im terrified diary Im cold and wet one second and then

suddenly I sweating from the bonfire The ship was rocking like crazy I heard a scream as billy

fell from the mast smashing onto the ground. I'm surprised he lasted that long 

on our mast. Suddenly I slip and fall into the giant waves. Goodbye cruel world. Wait no, I'm alive,

diary i'm alive. I grabbed a barrel just in time as the ship sank behind me. I’m clinging on

for me life and trying to climb on. Now i'm just

floating…….floating…….floating….

I hoped you enjoyed my post click on the link above to hear the soundtrack I used. I learnt how to write in a way that hooks people in.
I hoped you enjoyed it. did you have a favorite part?

BLOG Commenting :)

 What I know about blog commenting is.....

It Has to be positive thoughtful  helpful with a question.

It shouldn't be mean or rude.

you push publish when you finish.

you start with a greeting and their name and finish with your name.

you push notify me before you publish.

you can delete them.

You can reply to them .

You can start a conversation with them.

you write your comment in a small box.

under the post it tells you how many comments are there.

To read the comments or write one you push comment under the post.

they are good to tell people what you think of their post.

It always nice to read them.

you could make a friend through them.

Last week we learned how to put a link into a comment.                 

<a href="insert URL here">Insert display text here</a>

where it says insert URL here you delete it and paste the link

Where it says Insert display text here you delete and write what you want to say e.g. click here to listen/watch/read

Why don't you try leave me a link comment?

Help Wanted

 Our school theme is Pirates. We have done alot around them and this is part of it. It's A Help Wanted poster for our pirates. This is my one I hope you like it. Please comment.

I have learned how to write in such a way that will persuade someone to do something. I got my supplies from google search (for the background) and my brain.

I hope you like it and please comment if YOU would join this crew.