Floating

  imagine this, your on a boat sailing eating dinner when bang suddenly your in the middle of a storm. lightning hits the ship and it starts to sink...

This has been our story starter for a few days along with the soundtrack of a storm to help. (click here to hear the soundtrack). This is my story I hope you enjoy it. Please leave a comment.

Lights camera action!

Dear Diary

I’m DOOMED

It all started a few minutes ago

We were having mush When we heard Billy shout 

Batten down the hatches. Which of course means a storm is coming. We leaped of our 

chairs like there was a barnacle under our behinds. The captain started to scream out orders

And then the panic began.

After a few minutes the storm reached us. BOOM lightning hit the mast burstin it ta a 

thousand flamin pisces. Sorry for the bad spellin i’m in a  rush. Now you should know that  

a pirates first fear is fire so now every one was screamin and running all over the place . 

balles o rum were smashing and people were running over licking the ground trying to make

 there last seconds last. The sound of water spashin and trying to put out the

 flames echoed in my ear and I heard the screams of our prisoners as

 the water started to flood into there cell. The cannons had some how gotten lose

 and were rolling around every were. The smoke of fire mixed with the salt

 of the sea as giant waves crash onto me. Oh diary tell me wife I love her. 

Bang lightning hit the ship again and the ship started to sink. People were trying to get the water

 out of the ship by throwing it overboard Im terrified diary Im cold and wet one second and then 

suddenly I sweating from the bonfire The ship was rocking like crazy I heard a scream as billy

 fell from the mast smashing onto the ground. I'm surprised he lasted that long 

on our mast. Suddenly I slip and fall into the giant waves. Goodbye cruel world. Wait no, I'm alive,

 diary i'm alive. I grabbed a barrel just in time as the ship sank behind me. I’m clinging on 

for me life and trying to climb on. Now i'm just 

floating…….floating…….floating….

I hoped you enjoyed my post click on the link above to hear the soundtrack I used. I learnt how to write in a way that hooks people in.

I hoped you enjoyed it. did you have a favorite part?