imagine this, your on a boat sailing eating dinner when bang suddenly your in the middle of a storm. lightning hits the ship and it starts to sink...
This has been our story starter for a few days along with the soundtrack of a storm to help. (click here to hear the soundtrack). This is my story I hope you enjoy it. Please leave a comment.
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Dear Diary
I’m DOOMED
It all started a few minutes ago
We were having mush When we heard Billy shout
Batten down the hatches. Which of course means a storm is coming. We leaped of our
chairs like there was a barnacle under our behinds. The captain started to scream out orders
And then the panic began.
After a few minutes the storm reached us. BOOM lightning hit the mast burstin it ta a
thousand flamin pisces. Sorry for the bad spellin i’m in a rush. Now you should know that
a pirates first fear is fire so now every one was screamin and running all over the place .
balles o rum were smashing and people were running over licking the ground trying to make
there last seconds last. The sound of water spashin and trying to put out the
flames echoed in my ear and I heard the screams of our prisoners as
the water started to flood into there cell. The cannons had some how gotten lose
and were rolling around every were. The smoke of fire mixed with the salt
of the sea as giant waves crash onto me. Oh diary tell me wife I love her.
Bang lightning hit the ship again and the ship started to sink. People were trying to get the water
out of the ship by throwing it overboard Im terrified diary Im cold and wet one second and then
suddenly I sweating from the bonfire The ship was rocking like crazy I heard a scream as billy
fell from the mast smashing onto the ground. I'm surprised he lasted that long
on our mast. Suddenly I slip and fall into the giant waves. Goodbye cruel world. Wait no, I'm alive,
diary i'm alive. I grabbed a barrel just in time as the ship sank behind me. I’m clinging on
for me life and trying to climb on. Now i'm just
floating…….floating…….floating….
I hoped you enjoyed it. did you have a favorite part?
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