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Wednesday, 15 April 2020

Ed sheeran

for school today we had to make a DLO about Ed sheeran including 5-6 facts about him. I did a google drawing. Do you have any advice for next time?
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  1. Anonymous15 April 2020 at 10:54

    Hi Grace Logan here I Just want to say wow! that is so cool. I like how you have put in a lot of hard work.I like that you have spreed all the boxes around and there not all together.But one thing that I think you can do better is making the boxes so that they are not in other boxes. But apart from that everything else is good and I look ford to seeing your next post :)

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  2. Anonymous20 April 2020 at 13:01

    Hey Grace,its fina i think your work is great and I like the facts you put in. Its way better than mine, Well i hope your doing great.bye

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